Ran the hunter into the torchlight, clutching his throat as if his voice had spilled onto the ground. Smoke from wet nipa leaves stung every eye in the square. He opened his mouth and gave no cry. Behind him, Mount Inayawan loomed black against the sea wind. What had followed him home?
Men led him to the long house and sat him near the clay stove. His lips moved like a fish lifted from water. Not a word came. Another hunter arrived before the rice had even boiled, and he too pointed toward the forest and beat his chest in panic. By moonrise, three men had returned mute.
Children stopped chasing each other between the stilt houses. Mothers pulled them close and shut woven doors against the dark. Along the shore, the fishing boats knocked softly against one another, though no one had left them loose. The whole village listened for a sound that did not come.
Alunsina stood near the jar of water and kept both hands around the ladle to hide their shaking. She knew the missing sounds better than anyone. Her father had not returned that afternoon, and her older brother, Datuan, had gone to search for him before sunset. Each gust from the mountain brought the smell of damp bark and wild ginger, and each gust seemed to ask for another name.
When the old babaylan entered, people moved aside without a word. Her white hair hung in a single braid, and river shells clicked at her wrist. She looked first at the silent hunters, then at the children pressed against their mothers, and at last at Alunsina. The old woman lifted a bamboo spear from the wall, its point blackened in fire and rubbed smooth with oil.
"The busaw has changed its hunger," she said. "It takes the call from a person before it takes the path from his feet. If no one can cry for help, fear will drive the rest into its mouth."
Men lowered their eyes. Some had bolos at their belts, but none stepped forward. The babaylan turned the spear and placed it across Alunsina's palms.
She felt its lightness and feared it more than iron. "Why me?"
"Because you are afraid," the old woman said. "A proud man will fight his fear and feed it. You will carry yours and keep walking. When the diwata test your heart, do not ask for strength first. Ask to remain true. Speak your name when the mountain tries to steal it. Plant the spear where the earth still listens."
A murmur moved through the room like wind under mats. Alunsina looked toward the doorway, hoping to see her brother stride in with his crooked grin and his forest knife. She saw only darkness beyond the torchlight. Her mother pressed both fists against her mouth. That small movement cut deeper than any blade.
Alunsina bowed to the babaylan, though her knees felt hollow. The spear smelled of split cane and smoke. Outside, Mount Inayawan kept its silence, and she stepped toward it before dawn could grant her an excuse to stay.
The House of Breathless Men
Before sunrise, Alunsina crossed the village square with the spear tucked under one arm. Roosters had begun to call, but the sound felt thin under the mountain's weight. At the long house, the three mute hunters sat in a row on reed mats while their wives rubbed oil into their shoulders and searched their faces for a sign. Each time a child asked a question, one mother answered too fast, as if quick words could cover an empty mouth.
Among smoke and silence, the hunters could offer only a shape scratched into dust.
The babaylan burned dried leaves in a clay bowl. Bitter smoke curled along the rafters and settled into hair and cloth. No one asked the old woman to explain the rite. They watched the hunters' eyes instead. One man's fingers kept tracing a shape in the mat, over and over, as if he wrote a warning he could no longer speak.
Alunsina knelt beside him. She placed a cup of water near his hand and drew the same shape in the dust. A deep gash, a bend of stone, then a line like falling water. The hunter struck the floor with his palm and nodded so hard tears sprang into his eyes.
"A ravine," she said.
The babaylan looked at the sign and fed another leaf to the coals. "The busaw wants them to remember the place. It wants the rest of us to walk there carrying fear." She raised a strip of red cloth, then tied it just below Alunsina's right shoulder. "This is not armor. It is a witness. If you run, it will know. If you stand, it will know that too."
Alunsina's mother came forward with a packet of rice wrapped in leaf. Her hands shook so much that a few grains fell to the floor. She bent at once to gather them, because rice was never treated carelessly, not even in grief. "Eat before noon," she said. "If you do not feel hunger, eat anyway."
That plain advice steadied Alunsina more than grand words could have done. Her mother could not drive away spirits or read omens in smoke. She could only make sure her daughter did not enter the forest on an empty stomach. Alunsina took the packet with both hands and touched it to her forehead.
***
At the edge of the village, Datuan's hunting dog waited under a pandan tree. The dog whined once and nosed a scrap of cloth caught on a low branch. Alunsina knew the blue weave. It belonged to her brother.
Her chest clenched. She almost called his name, though the old warning chilled her tongue. The busaw stole voices first. Perhaps it took names the same way.
The babaylan stopped beside her and looked toward the tree line. Morning light had begun to silver the wet leaves, yet the forest mouth stayed dark. "Do not answer any cry from behind you," the old woman said. "Do not trust a face until the feet cast one shadow. And if the mountain shows you what you love, ask whether fear put it there."
Alunsina swallowed. "Will the diwata help me?"
"They watch," the babaylan said. "Help comes to the one who keeps faith with her own steps."
That answer offered no comfort she could hold. Still, she tucked the rice at her waist, tightened the bead-woven sash over her skirt, and gripped the spear. The bamboo flexed a little in her hand. It was made to bend and not break.
When she entered the trees, the village sounds dropped away one by one. First the surf faded. Then the chickens. Then even the small clack of shell bracelets behind her. She did not turn back to see when the babaylan stopped following.
Where the Ferns Hid Sound
The slope rose slowly at first. Alunsina passed under trees bearded with moss and stepped over roots slick as eel backs. Water dripped from leaves onto her neck. Somewhere above, a hornbill beat the air with heavy wings, but the sound seemed far away, as if the forest wrapped each noise in cloth.
The forest wore a loved face, but the ground beneath it held no shadow.
She found signs of the missing men in pieces. A heel mark at the edge of mud. A snared branch cut in haste. Datuan's second footprint beside another hunter's, both turned toward the same narrow game trail. She crouched and touched the print. The soil still held the clear line of his toes. The sight hurt her more than if the mark had vanished.
At noon she sat on a fallen trunk and unwrapped the rice. It had gone cool and slightly sweet from the leaf. She forced herself to chew, though her mouth had gone dry. Nearby, a line of black ants carried a dead beetle across a root. They did not pause because a frightened girl watched them. They simply bore their weight and kept moving.
That small order in the world gave her the next step.
***
The forest changed when she crossed a stream no wider than a sleeping mat. The air turned warmer. Ferns climbed high as a person's chest, and the trunks leaned close together, shutting out the sky. Alunsina called no greeting to the unseen spirits, but she touched the spear point to the ground in respect before she passed.
A voice answered from ahead. "Alunsina."
Her own name struck her spine like cold water. The call came in her brother's tone, tired and urgent. Branches shivered. A shape moved between them.
She nearly ran forward. Then she remembered the babaylan's warning and looked at the ground first. No shadow fell beneath the figure.
The thing stepped out wearing Datuan's face. Its smile sat wrong on his mouth. "Come quickly," it said. "Father is hurt."
Alunsina planted her heel. Her hands shook so hard that the spear rattled against a branch. "If you are my brother, tell me where our mother hides the river shells she counts when she worries."
The face blinked. For a heartbeat, its skin seemed to slide like wet bark. "Do not waste time," it said, and now her father's voice came from the same mouth. "You always move too slowly."
Fear rose hot in her throat. She had heard those words before, spoken in impatience, and that old sting made the false voice cut deeper. She tasted salt. Yet the pain also cleared her sight. The busaw had reached into her memory because it had found hurt there.
"You feed on what bends," she said.
The figure rushed at her without warning. She thrust the spear forward by instinct. The bamboo point struck its chest and passed through a skin of smoke. A smell of rotten leaves burst around her. The thing broke apart into crows, then into ash, then into nothing at all.
Silence crashed down after it vanished. Alunsina stood bent over, gasping, while sweat ran under the red witness cloth on her arm. She had not won. She had only refused the first trap.
A few steps later, she found a necklace of boar tusks hanging from a thorn bush. Datuan wore such a necklace when he hunted. One tusk had snapped at the cord. She lifted it with trembling fingers and saw fresh mud on the string. He had been here. He was still ahead, or had been.
The trail narrowed into stone. Water whispered somewhere below. Alunsina tucked the broken necklace inside her sash and followed the whisper toward the ravine.
The Ravine of False Fires
By late afternoon, the trees opened onto a cut in the mountain. The ravine ran deep and narrow, with black stone walls slick from hidden springs. Vines hung like ropes. Far below, water struck rock in a steady pulse that matched the beat inside Alunsina's throat.
Water became flame, and fear changed its mask without changing its hunger.
She climbed down sideways, testing each foothold before she trusted it. The bamboo spear scraped stone and left pale marks. Halfway down she saw a strip of blue cloth caught between rocks. It matched the scrap near the village. Datuan had passed this way. So had others. The thought tightened her chest until she had to stop and place one hand flat against the stone to steady herself.
At the bottom, the air smelled of clay after rain. The sound of water grew strange. It no longer fell in one place. It circled her from all sides.
Then the ravine filled with river.
Cold current struck her knees, then her waist, though no water touched the hem of her skirt. She heard the roar and saw foam rush past. Fish flashed silver around her legs. Up on the bank stood her mother, crying out with both arms lifted, while her father strained to hold the house posts against the flood. Datuan clung to a log and vanished under a brown wave.
Alunsina screamed his name inside her own head, but she forced her mouth shut. If she answered the vision, she would belong to it. She shut her eyes for one breath and opened them again.
The river remained.
She remembered another season instead: herself as a child, stumbling in waist-deep water while Datuan laughed and hauled her upright by the elbow. "Do not fight the current all at once," he had said. "Find the stone under your foot first."
So she searched with her senses instead of her panic. The air on her skin stayed dry. The spear in her hand had not grown wet. She lowered its tip. It struck dust.
The flood shattered like a jar dropped on rock.
The ravine darkened at once, and fire sprang up where the false water had stood. Orange tongues raced along the vines and climbed the walls. Heat pressed against her face. Smoke coiled through the narrow cut, carrying the sharp smell of burning resin. At its center sat the old babaylan, her back bent, coughing, while sparks fell into her white hair.
"Help me," the old woman gasped. "Leave the spear. Hands can save what wood cannot."
Alunsina took one step, then another, and stopped. The babaylan had once told her that a true elder protects the hand she sends into danger. This figure asked the opposite. It wanted her empty.
Her fear shifted then. Until that moment, she had feared pain, loss, and the creature hidden in the ravine. Now she feared failing the charge placed in her hands. The spear no longer felt like a burden given by others. It had become a trust she herself must keep.
"You are hungry," she said into the flames. "But not for blood."
The fire bent inward as if listening.
"You take our cries, then our names, then our wits. You do not kill first. You swell on dread until people drive themselves where you wait."
The blaze withdrew from the false babaylan and gathered at the far wall. Out of it stepped a shape taller than any man, lean as a dead tree, with eyes like wet coals and a mouth too wide for speech. It wore scraps of voices around it. She heard coughs, warnings, laughter, prayers, and broken calls for help turning in the air like trapped birds.
The busaw opened its mouth. No sound came out. Yet the ravine answered with a hundred stolen voices begging her to drop the spear and run.
Her legs wavered. Tears blurred the stone. She wanted the safety of her mother's rice pot, the smell of clean nets drying by the shore, the plain tasks of a small life. She had never desired glory. She only wanted her people to wake without dread.
That wish, humble and fierce, held her in place.
The creature backed toward a patch of bare earth near the wall, and Alunsina knew the last test waited there.
The Name Beneath the Mountain
The bare patch of ground looked plain beside the black stone, yet the busaw guarded it as a snake guards a warm hollow. Voices swirled around Alunsina in a tightening ring. She heard her mother sob. She heard Datuan call from somewhere above, sharp with pain. She heard her own younger voice, small and ashamed, asking why fear came so easily to her when courage sat so lightly on others.
She did not drive fear away; she named herself before it and held the ground.
The creature moved no closer. It only watched. Then she understood. The busaw needed her to surrender the ground herself. It could not wrench the final step from a person who still chose it.
Her hands steadied.
The babaylan's words returned, not as comfort, but as work: keep walking while afraid. That was all. No hidden power. No sudden hardening of the heart. Only one true step after another.
Alunsina drew a breath deep enough to hurt and stepped onto the bare earth. The voices around her rose in alarm. The busaw's coal eyes widened.
"I am Alunsina, daughter of Mahanay," she said.
The name struck the ravine wall and came back whole.
She set the spear butt to the ground and drove it down with both palms. The bamboo slid into the soil with a dry crack. At once the earth answered. The crack ran outward in a circle. Wind dropped through the ravine from the unseen ridge above, carrying the green scent of crushed leaves and mountain rain. Vines shivered. Water in the stone seams brightened like fresh-cut shell.
"Witness," Alunsina said, though her voice shook. She spoke not to command but to stand plainly before what watched the forest. "Witness that fear stands here and does not rule me. Witness your children taken by this hunger."
The busaw lunged.
The spear flashed with no fire and no metal. It remained bamboo, simple and pale, yet the ground around it held fast. The creature struck the ring of split earth and recoiled as if it had hit a wall. The stolen voices burst from its mouth in a storm. Some flew upward as cries. Some spilled low as sobs. Some came out as rough laughter from men who would never again waste breath on pride.
Among them rose one broken call she knew at once. "Alunsina!"
Her brother's voice rolled through the ravine from above.
The busaw shrank. Its limbs thinned into roots, then into smoke, then into a stain that sank below the spear. The last thing to vanish was its wide mouth, still straining to drink what the earth would no longer yield.
Silence returned, but it was no longer empty. Birds called from the rim. Water fell in one true place. Somewhere close, a man coughed, then another. Living sounds entered the ravine as if they had waited just outside a closed door.
***
Alunsina climbed toward the calls and found the missing hunters on a ledge above, weak but upright. Datuan sat among them with one arm wrapped around his ribs and mud dried across his cheek. When he saw her, he did not laugh or boast. He only bowed his head once, and in that quiet gesture she felt the full weight of what had nearly been lost.
Their voices had returned ragged. Some could speak only a few words before coughing. One hunter wept because he could call his son's name again. Another touched his own throat again and again, stunned by the sound of breath becoming speech.
Together they cut walking sticks and made the slow descent home. No one asked Alunsina to carry another's load, yet each man kept near her, as if the space around the bamboo spear still held firm ground.
When the village saw them emerge at dusk, people did not rush forward at first. They listened. Then Datuan called for water, clear and rough, and the square broke into tears and relieved cries. Alunsina's mother reached her and held her once, hard enough for both of them.
The babaylan examined the spear. A thin crack ran down one side where it had entered the earth. She smiled and set it beside the house post instead of hanging it back on the wall. "Good," she said. "Let people see what fear could not bend."
That night, no feast filled the square. The village kept a quieter rite. Families laid small cups of water and rice at their doorways for the unseen watchers of the mountain. Children slept close to their elders. Men who had once spoken loudly kept their voices low. And when dawn came, the first sound over the shore was not a boast from hunters or a drum from the long house, but women grinding grain and speaking each other's names with care.
Conclusion
Alunsina paid for her choice with the end of ease; after the ravine, no one would mistake her silence for weakness again. In a Visayan world shaped by spirits, names, and witness, courage did not need a warrior's shout. It needed a person who could keep faith with one step, one breath, one true name. Even years later, villagers still passed the cracked bamboo spear and lowered their voices before the mountain.
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